You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the food served on Flight 20367 departed from Bombay to New Delhi at 23:00 on June 24th. My seat number was 15B. The meal that was served after 90 minutes of boarding was cold and tasteless, despite my complaint to the air hostess, the meal was not replaced.

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, I was given a coupon in exchange which was not a fair trade in my opinion.

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, I was starving throughout the flight because for the next

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they did not have any vegetarian options provided. I would like to request a partial refund on my ticket for the inconvenience I was put through and I expect the refund to be

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at the earliest. I look forward to hearing back from your airline's customer service. Yours sincerely, Akshita Parasher

Submitted by parasherakshita123 on Sat Jun 03 2023

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IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

141 words

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