You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the food served on Flight 20367 departed from Bombay to New Delhi at 23:00 on June 24th. My seat number was 15B. The meal that was served after 90 minutes of boarding was cold and tasteless, despite my complaint to the air hostess, the meal was not replaced.

However

, I was given a coupon in exchange which was not a fair trade in my opinion.

Furthermore

, I was starving throughout the flight because for the next

meal

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,meal

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they did not have any vegetarian options provided. I would like to request a partial refund on my ticket for the inconvenience I was put through and I expect the refund to be

intiated

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initiated

at the earliest. I look forward to hearing back from your airline's customer service. Yours sincerely, Akshita Parasher

Submitted by parasherakshita123 on Sat Jun 03 2023

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Word Count

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

141 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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