Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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Overseas films have outweighed domestically made ones in many countries.

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there is a variety of factors for

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phenomenon, I do not think it is a good idea for governments to do financial intervention in

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an audience chooses foreign movies

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of local ones. Many countries have not had a professional film industry, so their genres of motion pictures are still limited, and cannot meet all the demands of their local audience.

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, some areas like Hollywood, Hongkong or Bollywood have advanced techniques and abundant film content.

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, Hollywood is famous for its action, adventure and science fiction movies, and they have dominated the box office all over the world.

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, learning a foreign language has become a must in today’s society, and

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entertainment value, watching foreign motion pictures is seen as an efficient way to practice the language.

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, I do not think governments should pour money into

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industry. I believe how much money they spend on

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, they will not be able to compete with Hollywood or other mature filmmakers, and

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is just a waste of national resources.

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industry does not benefit normal people in their daily lives,

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fund should go to vital public services

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, we all use schools, hospitals and roads, and we all need the security that the police provide, but we are all okay without watching

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kind of entertainment. If national authorities did not waste money on

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, many people could be lifted out of poverty or given a better quality of life. In conclusion, I can understand why many film lovers choose foreign movies, but it is not a reasonable way for governments to use economic leverage to tackle

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problem.

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task response

Ensure that the essay addresses all aspects of the prompt, including discussing both reasons for the preference of foreign films and the question of government financial support for local film industries.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the essay is generally good, with clear introduction and conclusion. However, maintaining more coherence within and between paragraphs will further enhance the overall organization of the essay.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

303 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Globalization
Cultural exchange
Cinematic expertise
Diverse narratives
Enriching cultural experience
Linguistic proficiency
Cinematography advancements
Government subsidies
Promote local talent
Economic sustainability

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Your opinion

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the threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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