Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present

Dear Raman, I am writing

this

letter to congratulate you on your newborn and I hope you and your kid

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perfectly fine. I am feeling on cloud nine that I became an aunt. In fact, I have decided to be the first one to celebrate

this

happiness and give a present to my nephew. So, I brought a kid's bed with all sides closed and a camera. As you were working from home and you both are living away from your parents. So, after maternity leave, it's gonna be very hard for you to keep an eye on

toddler

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during work time.

Therefore

this

bed will be great to let your newborn sleep peacefully without any fear of falling down.

Moreover

, you can connect the camera with your mobile phone to keep an eye on your kid during work hours.

Finally

, I am super excited to meet the cute little baby and play with him.

However

, I am free

this

weekend, please let me know if your schedule will allow us to meet.

Otherwise

, will plan another day. Can't wait to see you guys. Your's lovely, Navjot Kaur

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

189 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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