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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is a better than watching TV or playing computers game for children to what extend do you agree

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Nowadays, it is commonly believed that the method of storytelling is efficiently provided
that
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in that
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 its meaning is conveyed through
books
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 rather than the act of watching tv or playing computer games in terms of
children
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's perspective. I partly agree with
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 opinion. On the one hand , the content shown on tv or computers game is likely to be more attractive to the youth generation than
books
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.
To begin
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 with,
Children
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 tend to be easily attracted by colourful images with fascinating action which is directly observed by their eyes, as non-verbal contents usually require the readers to concentrate mostly on the information it giving
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 the attention span of
children
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 often is restricted
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 the growing stages of themselves.
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, their imagination towards those appealing media has a likelihood of fostering the sense of obtaining the meaning of that content.
On the other hand
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, the meaning of contents conveyed through
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 reading has potential beneficial effects towards young generations. It is the motivation for developing the imagination of young readers.
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 watching tv or playing computers game can easily attract
children
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, the
books
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 method encourages them to train their imagination skills by transferring the words they read into a profound world in their minds.
Although
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 reading
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 is a less appealing method for
children
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 nowadays, it is the most effective way to help
children
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 understand the meaning of the stories thoroughly. In conclusion,
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 other image-shown contents provide help
children
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 easily immerse in the stories, the profound effects of reading
books
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 for young generations are likely to not be underestimated
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