Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present
Dear Madhu,
It was a very pleasant surprise to hear from you, that you gave birth to a little angel. I hope
this
letter finds you both in radiant health.
I bought a nice gift for our newcomer. It is a wooden cot with a beautifully covered net and there is a wardrobe under the cot. There are some other options such
as you can push it with the help of wheels and also
lock the wheels. The main advantage is the size. it is different from the normal size and the size is 4*4. It was made of original teak and jack wood.
I went to search for a valuable gift for the baby and by ,accident I saw this
cot and I thought this
was the best present. The shop promises to provide transport facilities and next Friday they will arrive at your home. I also
come on that day and I hope to spend my full day with the baby. If you have another plan on Saturday please let me know.
Hoping to see you soon.
Best wishes.
ShainiSubmitted by pmmadushani123 on
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task response
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite