The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the
rate
of people Use synonyms
who
aged 65 and over in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
USA
, Use synonyms
Sweden
and Use synonyms
Japan
from the past to future Use synonyms
prediction
between 1940 to 2040.
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predictions
Overall
, the elder people in the Linking Words
USA
and Use synonyms
Sweden
are more than Use synonyms
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Japan
in the majority of Change preposition
in Japan
timeframe
. The percentage of the aged 65 and over in the Correct article usage
the timeframe
USA
is Use synonyms
the
top of the three but Change preposition
at the
replaced
by Add a missing verb
is replaced
Sweden
and Use synonyms
Japan
in the middle and the end of the statistic. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the most significant difference in the period given Linking Words
is
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in
Japan
in the 2020s.
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Initially
, the Linking Words
rate
of elder in the Use synonyms
USA
is stand at approximately 9.5% in 1940 compared to 7.5% and 5% in Use synonyms
Sweden
and Use synonyms
Japan
respectively. In Use synonyms
1990s
, there was Change the article
the 1990s
a compelling evidence
at around 14.5%, displaying Remove the article
compelling evidence
a piece of compelling evidence
a shred of compelling evidence
Sweden
surpassed the Use synonyms
USA
elder Use synonyms
rate
. By following Use synonyms
50-year
period, Correct article usage
the 50-year
Sweden
has a Use synonyms
fluctuated
increase and Replace the word
fluctuating
predicted
to Add a missing verb
is predicted
25
% in 2040, Add a missing verb
be 25
by contrast
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
USA
will Correct article usage
the USA
comes
to about 22.5%.
In terms of Wrong verb form
come
Japan
, old people in Use synonyms
Japan
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was
declined in the initial 20 years, Unnecessary verb
apply
than
remaining the level Replace the word
then
at
4% until Change preposition
of
1980s
. Before Change the article
the 1980s
2030s
, the elder Change the article
the 2030s
rate
in Use synonyms
Japan
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is grow
steadily to 10%. Change the verb form
is growing
However
, the statistic predicts that there will be a dramatical increase in the Linking Words
last
10 years, which reach Linking Words
the
27%, making Correct article usage
apply
Japan
become the most elder inhabitants country.Use synonyms
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