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the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population.

the table below gives information about the three countries with the highest population.
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The table provides data on five inhabitant indicators in
China
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,
India
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 and the
USA
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, ranked by their
population
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.
Overall
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, the indicators include
population
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,
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population
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 increase since 2017,
density
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, land area, and urban
population
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. Clearly,
China
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 is the most inhabitants and expansive country over the statistic
whereas
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India
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 has the densest masses.
Although
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 the
USA
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's
population
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 is not as many people as the other two countries, the rate of urban
population
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 is the highest one. In terms of the number of people,
China
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 and
India
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 have a huge figure of inhabitants, around 1.415 and 1.354 billion respectively, compared to the
USA
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 only has 327 billion.
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the
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 raise in
India
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 comes to 1.11%,
while
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 both remaining countries slightly grow under 1%. The
density
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 means the residents per square kilometre, associated with the land area.
As a result
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,
India
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 has the second high inhabitants but with just 2.973 million square kilometres, accounting for a
density
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 of 455.
By contrast
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,
China
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's
density
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 of 151 is because it with 9.388 million square kilometres with a large
population
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.
Conversely
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, the
USA
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 residents inhabit the wild area, but the majority of people live in the city, and the urban
population
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 reached 83%.

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