Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present

Dear Sara, I'm so glad to hear about the new family member's arrival. Shen showed me some pictures of

Godwin

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. He is so adorable

and

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, and

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I can't wait to meet you guys. Yesterday, I went to the nearby mall looking for presents for our dear

Godwin

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. I was so astonished to find out that there are so many choices

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I wasn't sure what to buy

and

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then

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I saw a baby in a stroller playing with rattles. It was so colourful

and

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he smiled each time

when

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apply

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he heard the sound

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, so

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I bought one for

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. It's made of wood, so need to worry if he nibs on it. I

also

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got him a baby hamper. I'll be around the city to visit one of my clients tomorrow

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have thought of visiting you. If you are free, let me know

I'll

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. I'll

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just drop by to see you, Alex and

Godwin

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. Take care. Looking forward to seeing you tomorrow. Best Regards, Green.

chitraindica18

Jun 4, 2023

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structure

Put one idea in each paragraph

cohesion

Use short, easy words and simple links to join ideas

grammar

Fix small errors in grammar and spelling (like comma use and 'nibs')

tone

Warm and friendly tone

content

Clear what you bought and why

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

164 words

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hand-knitted
texture
personal touch
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