Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present

Dear Sara, I'm so glad to hear about the new family member's arrival. Shen showed me some pictures of

Godwin

. He is so adorable and I can't wait to meet you guys. Yesterday, I went to the nearby mall looking for presents for our dear

Godwin

. I was so astonished to find out that there

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so many choices and I wasn't sure what to buy and

then

I saw a baby in a stroller playing with rattles. It was so colourful and he smiled each time when he heard the sound so I bought one for

Godwin

. It's made of wood, so need to worry if he nibs on it. I

also

got him a baby hamper. I'll be around the city to visit one of my clients tomorrow and have thought of visiting you. If you are free, let me know I'll just drop by to see you, Alex and

Godwin

. Take care. Looking forward to seeing you tomorrow. Best Regards, Green.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

164 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present

The internet means people do not need to travel to foreign countries to understand how others live. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to buy local commodities, while others think that world wide products have a better quality. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Some high school students work part-time in addition to going to school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having part-time jobs? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience