Your friend has a baby recently and you bought a present for baby. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe what you bought? Why you choose the present? Suggest some arrangements to visit your friend to bring the present

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Dear Sara, I'm so glad to hear about the new family member's arrival. Shen showed me some pictures of

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. He is so adorable and I can't wait to meet you guys. Yesterday, I went to the nearby mall looking for presents for our dear

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. I was so astonished to find out that there

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so many choices and I wasn't sure what to buy and

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I saw a baby in a stroller playing with rattles. It was so colourful and he smiled each time when he heard the sound so I bought one for

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. It's made of wood, so need to worry if he nibs on it. I

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got him a baby hamper. I'll be around the city to visit one of my clients tomorrow and have thought of visiting you. If you are free, let me know I'll just drop by to see you, Alex and

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. Take care. Looking forward to seeing you tomorrow. Best Regards, Green.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

164 words

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