Some
people
argued that more
sports
facilities
in the community would be a better way to improve public
health
, whilst others believed that it will
be resultChange the verb form
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in
smallAdd an article
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effect on
peopleChange noun form
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health
. In my opinion, I agree building more
sports
facilities
is not
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only solution for that and
othersCorrect quantifier usage
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factors need to be
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into account.
There are some benefits of providing more
sports
facilities
in order to keep
people
healthReplace the word
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.
Firstly
, building more
facilities
means it is easy for the members of the public to find a place for playing
sports
which Correct pronoun usage
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nearby their residents or working places, and it will increase incentives for them to do
sports
regularly in order to stay healthy.
Secondly
,
sports
facilities
are a good venue for promoting
sportChange the noun form
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games for the public.
For example
, the Government can organise
sports
games annually and it is another way to get the public
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participationReplace the word
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onChange preposition
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sports
.
Furthermore
, since
sports
facilities
are designed
byChange preposition
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playing
sports
and these would be built by international rules, it provides more safe
placeFix the agreement mistake
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and training spaces for
people
.
Apart from
anCorrect article usage
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addition of more
sports
facilities
, I believe there are many ways to get
people
more Correct quantifier usage
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healthy.
First,
balanceCorrect article usage
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diet would be one of the reasons to improve public
health
. If someone is
meat-eaterCorrect article usage
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and
doCorrect subject-verb agreement
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not have a
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diet, I do not think that
people
will
be maintainChange the verb form
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healthy
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aCorrect article usage
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long run.
Besides
, the public should do exercise regularly, and become a good habit for
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life.
Finally
, the Government should introduce a body check-up to the public in order to assess their
health
condition and provide
health
advicesChange the wording
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for them.
Since some
people
think that increasing more
sports
facilities
is the best way for
peopleChange noun form
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health
, I believe there are other measures to deal with it.