The two maps below show changes to the town of Somerville over a 10-year period.

The two maps below show changes to the town of Somerville over a 10-year period.
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The maps compare the features of Somerville town 10 years ago and now.
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, there is an evident development in every area in the village with the exception of the river which remained constant in the same location. Somerville suburb, a decade ago had a car park situated at the South of the river that runs from the West to the East.
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was replaced with the construction of some social amenities
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as a restaurant, a cafe and some hotels. At the South of these buildings is a bookstore just behind some shops. Interestingly, a footpath runs, circling these new sites to and fro the northeast. Surprisingly, the main road that ran horizontally from one side of the community to the other side got diverted at the city centre to meet a newly built car park at the right of the South. Opposite the park is a large area of golf course for sporting activities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Town
  • Changes
  • Ten-year period
  • Maps
  • Introduction
  • General description
  • Comparison
  • Specific areas
  • Development
  • Conclusion
  • Urbanization
  • Expansion
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential
  • Commercial
  • Public facilities
  • Roads
  • Green spaces
  • Population growth
  • Transportation
  • Aesthetic
  • Proximity
  • Accessibility
  • Modernization
  • Renovation
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