The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

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The given pie charts demonstrate the ratio of five different books sold by booksellers in the years between 1972 and 2012.

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, it is clear from the charts that

adult

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fiction

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has shown an upward trend . At the same time, the biography has revealed a downward trend.

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, there are two more which showed a decreasing trend.

Firstly

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, the percentage of travel books was about 15% in 1972 and

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had a slight increase of 3% in 1992 but

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decreased to 10%.

Likewise

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, biography had a percentage of 20 in 1972 and declined to 15% in 1992

finally

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the biography was the least sold book with a percentage of 8.The others were 25% in 1972 and dropped to 20% and at

last

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, it was the least sold book.

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, the group with increased growth were children's

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and

adult

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fiction

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. Both

fiction

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was 20% in the initial year and in 1992

adult

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fiction

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rise to 25% and children's

fiction

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to 22%.

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in the end period

adult

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fiction

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showed a huge increase to 45% .

Moreover

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, it was the highest-sold book. Meanwhile, children's

fiction

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accounts for 25% in 2012.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

189 words

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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

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