The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

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The given pie charts demonstrate the ratio of five different books sold by booksellers in the years between 1972 and 2012.

Overall

, it is clear from the charts that

adult

fiction

has shown an upward trend . At the same time, the biography has revealed a downward trend.

However

, there are two more which showed a decreasing trend.

Firstly

, the percentage of travel books was about 15% in 1972 and

also

had a slight increase of 3% in 1992 but

finally

decreased to 10%.

Likewise

, biography had a percentage of 20 in 1972 and declined to 15% in 1992

finally

the biography was the least sold book with a percentage of 8.The others were 25% in 1972 and dropped to 20% and at

last

, it was the least sold book.

Secondly

, the group with increased growth were children's

fiction

and

adult

fiction

. Both

fiction

was 20% in the initial year and in 1992

adult

fiction

rise to 25% and children's

fiction

to 22%.

Although

in the end period

adult

fiction

showed a huge increase to 45% .

Moreover

, it was the highest-sold book. Meanwhile, children's

fiction

accounts for 25% in 2012.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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