The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas between 2010 and 2015 in five various European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas between 2010 and 2015 in five various European countries.
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In various European countries,
coffee
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and
bananas
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imported from developing countries have been paid several prices. The price is given in millions of euro and the period is mentioned in 1999 & 2004.
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, Switzerland and UK have the greatest number of fair trade both for
coffee
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and
bananas
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.
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for least number of countries of fairtrade are different for each category. All of the numbers were increasing, except for Denmark and Sweden at fair trading
bananas
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. To start with, the most spent country for both categories are Switzerland and the UK (the number of fairtrade for
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are 1,5 and 3 million euro in 1999, 20 and 6 in 2004, respectively).
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for
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in 1999 are 15 and 1, in 2004 47 and 5.5, respectively.
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the least imported
coffee
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is from Sweden which only spent 0.8 and 1 million euro and Denmark for imported
bananas
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which spent 2 and 0.9. Belgium has a middle average in fair trading.
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