The bar chart illustrates the number of years at school of two sex in Singaporean, whereas the pie chart depicts the educational levels between 2000 to 2010.
The bar
chart
illustrates the number of years
at school
of two sex in Singaporean
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Singaporeans
whereas
the pie chart
depicts the educational levels between 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, It is noticeable that educational standards grew significantly after a decade in both male and female people. Besides
, university qualification is also
being focused and
promoted in social education.
Concerning the bar Change preposition
on and
chart
, there was an upward trend of male adults spending time at school
higher than female adults. Starting at nearly 9 million, after a decade, this
figure is much higher than initial, approximately just under 12 million. However
, the number of females attending class had a downward trend in the first 4 years
and has
tended to increase in the following Unnecessary verb
apply
years
from 8 to 9 million people due to
the change in Singapore
education policy.
Turning to the pie Change noun form
Singapore's
chart
, it can be seen clearly that only masters and university had a growth rate among other fields. University showed a
remarkable growth from 8,3% to 32,93% within 10 Remove the article
apply
years
of innovation. Following that, more than 30,31% of the educational attainment was from the master qualification sector (starting at 7,5%). The primary school
,secondary school
and highschool
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high school
qualification
account for 2,1%, 15,2% and 19,55% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
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