‘It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Hello,

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will introduce

my self

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myself

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first my name is Lanang Surya you can call me Lanang and

i

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am from

singaraja

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Singaraja

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, now i live in Denpasar City Batanghari River Va no.20. when

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first

stay

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in Denpasar

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am

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was

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so

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interesting

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to

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in

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culture

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the culture

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and

history

Garuda

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of Garuda

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Wisnu

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, i will discuss

with

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my friends and give the explain about

history

and culture

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Garuda

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in

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below:

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, if i anywhere go i always search or riset at the place that and if i wanna go with my friend i always find the plase for make me interested whether is culture or

history

, and im so interested of

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at Jimbaran, Badung. Because the

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history

and it's

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identity about

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. another point to consider, when

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was

senior

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in senior

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high school im

going

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to the

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with my friends from

singaraja

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for the holiday because we

so

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interested

of

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the

Tample

and area. The

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Tample

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is

monument

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a monument

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of

identity

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of

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it's a

have

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story about

like

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a

god

figure

in

religioun

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religious

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, long time a go

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have

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a

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more

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like

god

figure

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, Siwa,

indra

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Indra

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, Mahakali, Ganesha,

Krisna

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Krishna

, and

Garuda

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, Etc. The

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figue

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figures

have missions

for

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the save

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and the religion in

bali

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. in conclusion, all people in

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trust and have the

religioun

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religion

religious

Hindu at

Bali

with all

God

Figure

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. Because all people trust when

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have some problem who can only help only

god

we believe, is the reason why

Bali

have

alot

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a lot

a

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figure

and have

a

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lot

tample

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temple

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god

figure

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.