‘It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Hello,

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will introduce

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first my name is Lanang Surya you can call me Lanang and

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am from

singaraja

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Singaraja

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, now i live in Denpasar City Batanghari River Va no.20. when

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first

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in Denpasar

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am

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so

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interesting

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to

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in

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culture

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the culture

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and

history

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Garuda

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of Garuda

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Wisnu

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Kencana

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, i will discuss

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my friends and give the explain about

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and culture

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in

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, if i anywhere go i always search or riset at the place that and if i wanna go with my friend i always find the plase for make me interested whether is culture or

history

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, and im so interested of

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at Jimbaran, Badung. Because the

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Monumen have a

history

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and it's

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identity about

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. another point to consider, when

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was

senior

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high school im

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to the

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with my friends from

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for the holiday because we

so

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interested

of

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the

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and area. The

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of

identity

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of

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it's a

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story about

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a

god

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figure

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in

religioun

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religious

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, long time a go

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more

god

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like

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, Siwa,

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, Mahakali, Ganesha,

Krisna

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Krishna

, and

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, Etc. The

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figue

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have missions

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the save

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and the religion in

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bali

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. in conclusion, all people in

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bali

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trust and have the

religioun

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religion

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with all

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. Because all people trust when

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have some problem who can only help only

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we believe, is the reason why

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have

alot

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a lot

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and have

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lot

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god

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