Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

At present, many people state an opinion that capital
punishment
is the best way for securing and declining crimes. I believe that the
death
penalty
can be a solution to some cases but not all. The aim of
this
essay is to extend both points of view with relevant examples.
To begin
with, capital
punishment
is essential
due to
lowering criminal cases but it can be caused by disorders. Most murderers are mentally unhealthy and
also
affected by genetic factors. It might be the cause of criminal behaviour.
For example
, recent studies have shown that violent murderers who killed a huge amount of people are sociopaths.
Additionally
, researchers found that a person whose parents have mental disorders is more likely to commit a crime than those who have not. Because of that individuals who have mental disorders should get psychosocial assistance
instead
of
death
Add an article
the death
show examples
penalty
.
On the other hand
,
death
Add an article
the death
show examples
penalty
can be a solution for securing citizens from rape and crimes. If the murderer is devoided of life, people will be more safe.
For instance
, a person who committed a crime for several years
then
was imprisoned for five years, after exemption that person might commit a crime again. In
such
,cases capital
punishment
can be the right way to increase violence.
To conclude
, numerous types of crimes were committed by genetic and mental illnesses. In my own point of view, they should get help
instead
of
death
Add an article
the death
show examples
penalty
.
Also
, some incidents need capital
punishment
to secure citizens' life.
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