People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

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People

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hold conflicting views about both methods of reducing

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in society.

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I tend towards the viewpoint that the best way to reduce

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is to give longer prison, I would have to support using alternative solutions for reducing

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. It is believed that these offenders should be punished with a long prison sentence because

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phenomenon may cause numerous fears of other crimes.

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, if someone has an awareness of chastisable intensity before doing something wrong,

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will prevent them from becoming an offender .

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, rapists and murderers in the UAE often get imprisonment

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. Which is leading to making them think twice before committing a serious

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. There are a number of alternative solutions for reducing lawbreakers

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as providing educational institutions and creating suitable job opportunities for

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to solve the problems effectively.

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, if all

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are fully educated and have a certain job, they will be busy with work and have no time to commit crimes. In fact, there is a free education for citizens in Sweden and their government is doing

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effectively.

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a reason why Sweden always stands at the top in peaceful nations where the lawbreaker’s rate is low in the category of international peace and security. In conclusion,

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some

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think that offenders should have longer prison sentences in order to reduce

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rate. I personally believe that there would be more alternative solutions to reduce

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in society

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of using the method before.

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Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?