The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The given bar chart illustrates the quantities of
seals
Use synonyms
, whales and
dolphins
Use synonyms
who were recorded over twelve years, from 2006 until 2018 at Gormez Straits.
Overall
Linking Words
it can be clearly seen that the
number
Use synonyms
of
dolphins
Use synonyms
significantly increase from 2006 and reached a high of figure in 2018.
Seals
Use synonyms
and whales show a fluctuating
trend
Use synonyms
over the given years and reach approximately the same
number
Use synonyms
at the end
Linking Words
of the
period
Use synonyms
as well as
Linking Words
its start. Looking at the bar chart in more detail, the
number
Use synonyms
of
seals
Use synonyms
decreased sharply in the first given
period
Use synonyms
from 2006 to 2010 , about 42 to 22 respectively.
However
Linking Words
, in the next following
period
Use synonyms
from 2010 to 2018, the
number
Use synonyms
of
seals
Use synonyms
shows an increasing
trend
Use synonyms
and accounted approximately for 22,35 and 45 respectively.
At the end
Linking Words
of the
period
Use synonyms
, the
number
Use synonyms
of
seals
Use synonyms
recorded approximately the same amount
as well as
Linking Words
its start. Whales show a fluctuating
trend
Use synonyms
over the given
period
Use synonyms
but had a similar
trend
Use synonyms
with
seals
Use synonyms
, which is recorded approximately for the same amount, about 23 in 2006 and 26 in 2018.
On the other hand
Linking Words
,
dolphins
Use synonyms
portray a tremendous increasing
trend
Use synonyms
from 2006 until 2018. It accounted for about 18 in 2006 and continue to increase in 2010 and 2014 to 21 and 32 respectively. The
number
Use synonyms
of
dolphins
Use synonyms
reached a peak in 2018, recorded at about 52.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as, at the end".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words seals, dolphins, number, trend, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • Recorded
  • Gormez Straits
  • Fluctuation
  • Seals
  • Whales
  • Dolphins
  • Height
  • Individuals
  • Steadily declined
  • Relatively stable
  • Lowest
  • Significant increase
  • Approximately
  • Slight recovery
What to do next:
Look at other essays: