A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: -Tell your friend you understand the problem. -Explain what happened to you in the past. -Suggest possible solutions to the problem.

Dear Thomas, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.It's been so long since we have had a meet-up and reminisced the things.Anyways,I am writing to discuss the problem of work-life balance that you have been facing at your work for the

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couple of months.

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, I'd say that I completely understand your situation because you are in my shoes now.Well, you are well known about the experiences that I used to have at my workplace.I remember that I barely got a day off in a week at that time and I had to work overtime as well.I was completely depressed and I can say that your situation is

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similar to mine.So, I'm with you. Gladly, I'm satisfied now with everything because of the steps that I had been taken to overcome my problems.You may remember that I discussed everything with my manager that I can't do overtime so I'd suggest you consult with your supervisor and if you still do not feel well

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start looking for another job with an outstanding work schedule and pay rate.I hope

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will help you. Best regards, Anmol

sehjpalanu

Jun 5, 2023

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