A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: -Tell your friend you understand the problem. -Explain what happened to you in the past. -Suggest possible solutions to the problem.

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Dear Thomas, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.It's been so long since we have had a meet-up and reminisced the things.Anyways,I am writing to discuss the problem of work-life balance that you have been facing at your work for the

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couple of months.

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, I'd say that I completely understand your situation because you are in my shoes now.Well, you are well known about the experiences that I used to have at my workplace.I remember that I barely got a day off in a week at that time and I had to work overtime as well.I was completely depressed and I can say that your situation is

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similar to mine.So, I'm with you. Gladly, I'm satisfied now with everything because of the steps that I had been taken to overcome my problems.You may remember that I discussed everything with my manager that I can't do overtime so I'd suggest you consult with your supervisor and if you still do not feel well

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start looking for another job with an outstanding work schedule and pay rate.I hope

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will help you. Best regards, Anmol

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

193 words

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A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: -Tell your friend you understand the problem. -Explain what happened to you in the past. -Suggest possible solutions to the problem.

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What does this cause? What are the effects ?

The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media?

The spread of multinational companies and the increase of globalization produces positive effects for everyone. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

in recent years, many small local shops have closed because customer travel to large shopping center or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?