The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » Write at least 150 words. » You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for

manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.

» Write at least 150 words.

» You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The following table illustrates the proportion of the
market
for the factories which produced mobile phones between 2005 and 2006. As can be seen from the table, Nokia, Motorola and Sony Ericsson witnessed an increase in
market
share
while
there was a decrease of those in the
share
of Samsung, LG, and BenQ mobile from 2005 to 2005.
In addition
, Nokia is dominant in the phone
market
in the world during the research period. Looking at the given table, one can see that the
market
share
of Nokia accounted for 32.5% in 2005 before rising sharply to reach a peak in 2006, at 35%.
In contrast
, BenQ Moblie was the smallest
share
that contributed to the mobile
market
at 4.9% in 2005 before hitting the lowest point at 2.4% in 2006.
Moreover
, Motorola grew gradually to 21.1% in 2006. Following that, Sony reached 7.4%
at the end
of the period
while
there was a modest decrease in the
share
of Samsung at 11.8 in 2006.
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