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Some scientist thinks that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and message should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is no doubt that
humans
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 have been trying to contact extraterrestrial beings. Many scientists believe that
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 trend is risky and unsafe,
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 others argue that building a relationship with different intelligent
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forms
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 could bring benefits to society. In
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 essay, I will discuss both sides of the topic and explain my support for the latter view.
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, trying to send messages to other
planets
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 could be both risky and pointless from financial and understanding perspectives.
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 is because the messaging process would be dramatically expensive, considering all the challenges that extraterrestrial
travel
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 has, and other intelligent
life
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forms
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 would not be able to understand a message from
Earth
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 afterwards.
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, a written letter could not be understood by an extraterrestrial being.
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 idea can
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 be dangerous, as
humans
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 currently do not know how to protect themselves against threats from other
planets
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. Scientists should consider
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 risk because once extraterrestrial beings are aware of all natural resources available on
Earth
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,
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 as water and oil, they can use their strength to steal them from
humans
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.
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, in
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 scenario,
life
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 on
Earth
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 would be threatened.
On the other hand
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, contacting other intelligent
life
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forms
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 can benefit
humans
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 in terms of economic and technological development.
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, other
planets
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 may have abundant commodities available, so a new way of trading would raise between
Earth
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 and other
planets
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.
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, extraterrestrial intelligence may be ahead of
humans
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 in the development of technology, especially when it comes to aircraft that are capable to minimize the duration of
travel
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 to extremely distant locations.
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, through
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 contact, scientists can learn how to build spaceships which are able to
travel
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 to other galaxies in less than a month.
As a result
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, humanity would be able to
travel
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 to space, creating trade routes with other
planets
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.
To conclude
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,
while
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 there are disadvantages of contacting other intelligent
life
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forms
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,
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 as the threats against mankind, I personally feel that the benefits of travelling to other galaxies in a short time and trading with other
planets
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 outweigh the drawbacks.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Extraterrestrial
  • Intelligent life forms
  • Technological advancements
  • Knowledge exchange
  • Fundamental questions
  • Universe
  • Intergalactic communication
  • Peaceful interaction
  • Hostile entities
  • Earth's security
  • Implications
  • Aggressive civilizations
  • Unintended consequences
  • Terrestrial issues
  • Non-human entities
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