Writing Task 2 Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

There is a controversial issue that should

experts

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need to stay in the nation ,which

they

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been trained, and make some contributions. Some people claim it is necessary to require them

stay

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, in

the

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contrast, some believe

experts

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can make the decision by themselves. In my opinion, I think those professionals have

same

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the same

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right to move as

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a human, at the same time, they

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can provide some benefits back to the country which has educated them.

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those

experts

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can have manifold ways to show their appreciation to the place

educated

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them. I accept the idea that it causes a huge cost to train

a

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professionals, if those trained people

leaves

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leave

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the country after completing their courses, those remarkable financial

supports

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support

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will be in vain.

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, everyone has

their

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right to move, it is illegal to restrict them in any case. And I believe, without the geographical limitation, there is still a great proportion of

experts

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,like professors, scientists and craftsmen,

are

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who are

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willing to stay in the same nation

that

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where

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they took lessons.

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have it not been for being educated in different places, it is hard for those

experts

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to gain diverse perspectives from

others culture

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other cultures

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. In

this

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contemporary world,

to be

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being

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a

muti-functional

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multi-functional

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and

multi-cultural

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multicultural

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person can

contributes

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more benefits to

the

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society.

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, some doctors travel around the world to cure some rare diseases

among

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in

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Africa, South America and the part of

southeast

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Southeast

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Asian countries, with those kind

doctor’

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of doctor’

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medical

expertises

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expertise

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, the

deseases

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diseases

can be improved significantly.

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, the county which has trained them can gain a good reputation

by

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through

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this

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contribution. In conclusion, I partially understand the main reason why some people advocate that the

experts

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need to stay,

however

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, for a widened and bigger picture, it is better for professionals to decide.