The chart below shows the level of satisfaction of health care system in four countries in three years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
line graph depicts the percentage of satisfaction people
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of people
on
the health care system. Is It clear from the diagram that there was a decline in Canada in 1998Change preposition
in
.
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According to
what is shown the UK has a constant rate in all the years with more than 20%, but Canada has varied percent
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per cent
started
with the highest percentage in 1991 and with a Wrong verb form
starting
decreased
in 1998.
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decrease
Moreover
, there was a
growth in the US in 1998Correct article usage
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,
and started to be stable in 2006.Remove the comma
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Moreover
, There was a random percent
in Replace the word
percentage
Netherlands
with increased in 1998 and decreased in the next period.
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the Netherlands
To sum up
, we could say that the United Kingdom was stable, but the other countries have a
random growth and decline in some years.Correct article usage
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