The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graph illustrates the emissions of

air

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pollution from discrete

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in each year between 1990 and 2005 in the UK.

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the graph, the most

air

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pollution which is released from Industry is the largest amount of

air

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pollutants

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accounting for total

Air

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Pollutants

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.

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there was a

dramatically

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decrease in

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quality

problem

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problems

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between 1993 and 1996 (approximately 5

million

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of

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apply

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tones

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falling to about 3

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of

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Tons) and a

steadily

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decline in the others year from 1990(estimated 5.5

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of

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tones

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) to 2005 (about 2

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of

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), the number of

air

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pollutants

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released by the industry was the highest compared to the others main

sources

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(Transport and Households). Meanwhile, the

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of

air

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pollutants

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emitted from transport always

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consistent at 1

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tons throughout the period(1990-2005). Focusing on the amount of

Air

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pollutants

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coming from household

sources

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, there

was

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1

million

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tones

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of contaminants in 1990.

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, the numbers decrease slightly to approximately 1.9

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tones

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in1993

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in 1993

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subsequently

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decrease

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and stay the same numbers in 1993 and 1996 respectively.

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, it steadily dropped to

at

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0.1

million

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tones

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at the end

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of the period In conclusion, the total number of

air

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pollutants

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produced by three main

sources

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in the UK from 1990 to 2005 persistently reduced from 7

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tonnes of

air

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contaminants to 4

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tonnes in 1999

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subsequently

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marginally dropped to about 3.9

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tones

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and ultimately fell to 3

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tones

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