The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)
The graph illustrates the emissions of
air
pollution from discrete sources
in each year between 1990 and 2005 in the UK.
According to
the graph, the most air
pollution which is released from Industry is the largest amount of air
pollutants
accounting for total Air
Pollutants
. Although
there was a dramatically
decrease in Change the adverb
dramatic
air
quality problem
between 1993 and 1996 (approximately 5 Fix the agreement mistake
problems
million
of
Change preposition
apply
tones
falling to about 3 million
of
Tons) and a Change preposition
apply
steadily
decline in the others year from 1990(estimated 5.5 Change the adverb
steady
million
of
Change preposition
apply
tones
) to 2005 (about 2 million
of tones
), the number of air
pollutants
released by the industry was the highest compared to the others main sources
(Transport and Households). Meanwhile, the numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
air
pollutants
emitted from transport always stay
consistent at 1 Wrong verb form
stayed
million
tons throughout the period(1990-2005). Focusing on the amount of Air
pollutants
coming from household sources
, there was
1 Change the verb form
were
million
tones
of contaminants in 1990. Correct your spelling
tonnes
Then
, the numbers decrease slightly to approximately 1.9 million
tones
Correct your spelling
tonnes
in1993
and Correct your spelling
in 1993
subsequently
decrease
and stay the same numbers in 1993 and 1996 respectively. Wrong verb form
decreased
Finally
, it steadily dropped to at
0.1 Change preposition
apply
million
tones
at the end
of the period
In conclusion, the total number of air
pollutants
produced by three main sources
in the UK from 1990 to 2005 persistently reduced from 7 million
tonnes of air
contaminants to 4 million
tonnes in 1999 then
subsequently
marginally dropped to about 3.9 million
tones
and ultimately fell to 3 Correct your spelling
tonnes
million
tones
.Correct your spelling
tonnes
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