The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 snd 2008.

The charts show the sources of the electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 snd 2008.
The pie charts illustrate information about three different sources of manufacturing
electricity
in three nations over five years from 2003 to 2008. It is clear from the charts that all four countries used the electronic produced from fossil
fuel
and hydropower. But the producing
electricity
by nuclear power was not available in Vietnam and
Morocco
. India was the highest manufactured
electricity
by fossil
fuel
,
accounted
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for more than three-quarters. The second country that made fossil
fuel
electricity
was Vietnam with
the
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percentage constituted 56%.
By contrast
, the rate of fossil
fuel
electricity
in Sweden and
Morocco
was the lowest, at about 4% and 5% respectively.
Furthermore
, the proportion of
electricity
made by hydropower in
Morocco
mainly comprised all the
electricity
produced in
this
country, at about 95%,
while
the lowest was India accounting for 14%. The proportion of Sweden that used nuclear power
electricity
was the biggest, accounting for 44%;
however
, the figure for India was lower, at just about 4%. Especially, Vietnam and
Morocco
even did not use
electricity
produced by nuclear power.
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