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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent times,
students
 find it difficult to get
along with
 the working environment after their schooling. To bridge
this
 gap, some suggest that
students
 should
work
 part-time
while
 they are studying. I partly agree with
this
 suggestion and
this
 essay will examine the reasons with substantial evidence.
To begin
 with, the theoretical knowledge gained through education is not sufficient to thrive in a
work
 environment. An organisation looks for a dynamic thinker who can solve problems in an efficient way. These skills can be acquired only through
practise
Replace the word
practice
show examples
.
For instance
, knowledge about time management and benefits are taught at schools but a student needs to know how to implement them in real
life
.
Thus
 to survive, not only knowledge is required but
also
 additional skills.
Instead
, if a student works part-time
along with
 his academics, it helps in a smooth transition to
work
life
. It
also
 enables one's understanding
due to
 the hands-on training.
On the contrary
,
students
 might get too involved in intern jobs losing their focus on their studies.
This
 could have a detrimental impact affecting the student's
life
.
Moreover
,
students
 find it difficult to juggle between jobs and studies, causing stress.
For example
,
students
 who involve in part-time
work
, find less time to study or do homework as they are tired after
work
.
Therefore
, it is good to concentrate on studies rather than both. To summarize, it is good to develop skills by working part-time
while
 studying as it renders a smooth transition into working
life
.
However
,
students
 should prioritise the task and
work
accordingly
 without losing focus.
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