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Living In A Country Where You Have To Speak A Foreign Language Can Cause Serious Social And Practical Problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living In A Country Where You Have To Speak A Foreign Language Can Cause Serious Social And Practical Problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
#country #language
Living in a
country
 where you must speak a foreign
language
 can and will cause serious social
problems
,
as well as
 practical
problems
. The state where you must speak a second
language
 and could possibly not be as well diverse in vocabulary and
grammar
 as the
country
’s regular citizens would cause a huge problem. They would be having a hard and difficult
day to day
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 life that could ruin their reputation and credit.
For example
, you need and want to get a job in
the
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a
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 foreign
country
 but because of your
grammar
 and crooked fluency, you could not get the job.
Although
, people with high experience and knowledge
with
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of
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the
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a
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 foreign
language
 could have a high chance to get a better life in
the
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a
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 foreign
country
. The importance of the
language
 barrier is unfathomably huge
that
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and
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 it could affect
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employment opportunities, access to services, social integration, etc. We should all be prepared to face these
language
 challenges by learning the
grammar
 and by doing literacy,
for example
; learning the vocabulary and
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 accent by watching videos of that
language
, learning by reading the
grammar
that is
 used,
analyze
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problems
 &
solve
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solving
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 them using that
language
, learn hard and difficult words of that
language
, etc.
While
 these challenges exist, it is important to note that with time, effort, and
language
 learning, many of these
problems
 can be overcome. Taking
language
 courses, and actively seeking opportunities to practice the
language
 can very much help improve social interactions and practical experiences in a foreign
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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