Both men and women these days work full-time, so it is logical for them to share household chores equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is sometimes argued that
both
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males and females can do
housework
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equally because they have full-
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works
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in
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day and age. In my viewpoint, I totally agree with
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argument for several reasons below.
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, they receive
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same amount of
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, unlike those
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in the past, so traditional roles are unsuitable nowadays. In the past,
men
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worked outside to earn money to bring up all members of their families and
women
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took care
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their houses and the offspring.
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, in
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day and age,
women
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can receive
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same amount of income
like
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men
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do.
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equally
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incomes from
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genders in a family, they can share household chores when they finish their work and stay at home.
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, their
housework
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could be done faster and could be
carry
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on by
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genders
instead
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of relying on
women
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in their houses.
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, with the advent of modern technology,
housework
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is easier and faster to deal with by
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men
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and
women
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. There are more technological devices which are affordable for many households
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as washing
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machines
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and cleaning
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robots
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that save owners
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to do more crucial
works
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work
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.
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, in the past, washing dishes needed a massive amount of
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to make them clean, nowadays, by owning a washing machine, they can rely on
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machine to wash cleanly their dirty dishes. These activities could be done by males and females because these tasks do not require too many skills and
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to deal with.
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,
both
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men
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and
women
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can do these activities actively without any help, share
housework
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with others and allocate more
time
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to their partners as well. In conclusion, I concur that
both
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men
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and
women
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can share their household chores because of the equal incomes that they earn and the popularity of technology that save their
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to do
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housework
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.

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