Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friend who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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some people believe
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a friend
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friend
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friends
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who always
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the same arguments as
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, others think it is finer to choose
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who sometimes have the
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opinion
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both opinions
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my own point of view. On the one hand,
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with the same ideas have less challenging
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. Having a challenging relationship with
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would be inconvenient and sometimes far from peace for them.
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,
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with the same political views have no serious
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each other
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as watching films
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genre or going to the same restaurant and having
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type of food would
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pleasent
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pleasant
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,
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differentiation
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the opinions
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of
friends
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to improve their personalities
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their knowledge. People learn
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due to
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realise the
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, In conclusion,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consensus
  • Divergent views
  • Echo chamber
  • Intellectual growth
  • Constructive feedback
  • Cognitive diversity
  • Perspectives
  • Challenge assumptions
  • Social cohesion
  • Conflict resolution skills
  • Broaden horizons
  • Open-mindedness
  • Reinforce beliefs
  • Homogeneous group
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