The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph compares two cities in England namely
Derby
and Use synonyms
Nottingham
in terms of the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
houses
built each year, from 2000 to 2009.
From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, it is evident that both sets of Linking Words
figures
for Use synonyms
Derby
and Use synonyms
Nottingham
witnessed an upward trend over the ten-year period. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
houses
built each year in Use synonyms
Derby
either increased or stayed the same, the Use synonyms
figures
for Use synonyms
Nottingham
saw greater fluctuations.
It can be seen from the graph that in 2000, the Use synonyms
number
of newly built homes in Use synonyms
Derby
was just under 50, and steadily increased over the next three years to reach around 125 Use synonyms
houses
in 2003. The Use synonyms
figures
Use synonyms
then
remained the same for the next four years before dramatically increasing in 2008 and 2009, to reach a figure of approximately 350 homes by the end of the period.
Linking Words
However
, the Linking Words
figures
for Use synonyms
Nottingham
followed a rather different pattern. Between 2000 and 2005 the Use synonyms
figures
for newly built homes fluctuated around 50, before dropping to almost 0 in 2006. A large increase of almost 200 newly built Use synonyms
houses
was seen in 2007, but the figure Use synonyms
then
once again dropped to around 10 Linking Words
houses
in 2008. 2009 witnessed another surge in the Use synonyms
number
of new Use synonyms
houses
, with the figUse synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words derby, nottingham, number, houses, figures with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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