The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. 

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph compares two cities in England namely
Derby
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and
Nottingham
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in terms of the
number
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of
houses
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built each year, from 2000 to 2009. From an
overall
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perspective, it is evident that both sets of
figures
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for
Derby
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and
Nottingham
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witnessed an upward trend over the ten-year period.
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,
while
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the
number
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of
houses
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built each year in
Derby
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either increased or stayed the same, the
figures
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for
Nottingham
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saw greater fluctuations. It can be seen from the graph that in 2000, the
number
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of newly built homes in
Derby
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was just under 50, and steadily increased over the next three years to reach around 125
houses
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in 2003. The
figures
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then
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remained the same for the next four years before dramatically increasing in 2008 and 2009, to reach a figure of approximately 350 homes by the end of the period.
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, the
figures
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for
Nottingham
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followed a rather different pattern. Between 2000 and 2005 the
figures
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for newly built homes fluctuated around 50, before dropping to almost 0 in 2006. A large increase of almost 200 newly built
houses
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was seen in 2007, but the figure
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once again dropped to around 10
houses
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in 2008. 2009 witnessed another surge in the
number
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of new
houses
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, with the fig
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words derby, nottingham, number, houses, figures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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