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A friend of yours is thinnking to applying for the some course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying the subject Give detais of the course you took at the university. Explain why you recommended the university. Give some advice about how to apply

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Dear Sara, I hope you are doing well. I'm wondering to hear the news that you are going to start your higher studies at Eastern University, Australia. First of ,all let me give you a chance to congratulate you.
Further
, I would like to tell you about the course content. The course duration is 3 years and Zoology, Chemistry and Botany have included as major subjects. I would say the practical sessions are quite hard.
Therefore
, you have to work hard.
Moreover
,
this
 is one of the best universities in Australia. I believe
this
 will be
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 great decision you have ever made to follow a course which belongs to the Faculty of Science. In order to do that, universities consist of modern learning technology and sophisticated laboratories. Those facilities feel
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more better and comfortable. When you are going to apply, please make sure to fill out the applications without errors.
In addition
 to that, you should be careful when choosing the accommodation facilities which will be provided by the university.
Finally
, I would like to wish your future studies. Love P.Aya
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