some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes air pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Nowadays,
air
pollution
has been a major problem in the world. It is often argued that air
transportation should be restricted since it results to
Change preposition
in
air
pollution
. In my opinion, I somewhat disagree with this
statement and I will discuss the positive and negative impacts of air
pollution
.
Firstly
, the positive impact is that it is more
faster and easier for people Change the word
apply
travel
by Fix the infinitive
to travel
air
. In the
view of the fact that people Correct article usage
apply
travel
comfortably without encountering any problems like bad roads, kidnapping unlike
road transportation which is not safe. Add the comma(s)
,unlike
For instance
, when an individual needs to go for a business trip or meeting, all the person needs to do is to
book a flight and Fix the infinitive
apply
gets
to the country in no time.
Correct subject-verb agreement
get
Secondly
, air
pollution
should also
not be neglected. It releases hazardous waste like carbon dioxide, nitrogen
oxide emission into the Correct word choice
and nitrogen
earth
atmosphere. Change noun form
earth's
As a result
, it affects one’s health and might leads
to death when inhaled into the Change the verb form
lead
body
system. In some cases, when it is quickly treated an individual’s life can be saved. Too much of
Change preposition
apply
air
travel
can also
cause adults to age faster and some other diseases like cancer. In other words
, the chance of body
Correct article usage
the body
to form
blood clots increases when the Change the verb form
forming
body
is not moving correctly. For example
, when a person is onboard Correct article usage
a long
long haul
flight. Add a hyphen
long-haul
In addition
, blood pressure can also
rise unexpectedly because one’s
Change preposition
of one’s
have
phobia of Unnecessary verb
apply
air
travel
which can cause health issues.
In conclusion, air
travel
is beneficial because it is faster for people to move from one place to another. Nevertheless
, It should also
abandoned
in some theories as it affects the Change the verb form
be abandoned
abandon
body
health.Change noun form
body's
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