some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes air pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays,

air

pollution

has been a major problem in the world. It is often argued that

air

transportation should be restricted since it results

to

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air

pollution

. In my opinion, I somewhat disagree with

this

statement and I will discuss the positive and negative impacts of

air

pollution

.

Firstly

, the positive impact is that it is

more

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faster and easier for people

travel

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by

air

. In

the

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view of the fact that people

travel

comfortably without encountering any problems like bad roads, kidnapping

unlike

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road transportation which is not safe.

For instance

, when an individual needs to go for a business trip or meeting, all the person needs to do is

to

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book a flight and

gets

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to the country in no time.

Secondly

,

air

pollution

should

also

not be neglected. It releases hazardous waste like carbon dioxide,

nitrogen

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and nitrogen

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oxide emission into the

earth

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atmosphere.

As a result

, it affects one’s health and might

leads

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to death when inhaled into the

body

system. In some cases, when it is quickly treated an individual’s life can be saved. Too much

of

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air

travel

can

also

cause adults to age faster and some other diseases like cancer.

In other words

, the chance of

body

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to form

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blood clots increases when the

body

is not moving correctly.

For example

, when a person is onboard

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a long

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long haul

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flight.

In addition

, blood pressure can

also

rise unexpectedly because

one’s

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have

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phobia of

air

travel

which can cause health issues. In conclusion,

air

travel

is beneficial because it is faster for people to move from one place to another.

Nevertheless

, It should

also

abandoned

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in some theories as it affects the

body

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health.