Some people prefer to live in a house while other feel that living in an apartment has more advantages. Discuss Advantage and disadvantages

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Accomodation
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Accommodation
is the main part to live in the
desireable
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desirable
place, either it is a
house
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or an apartment in
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a builing
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builing
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building
.
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, some
people
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prefer that it is
benificial
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beneficial
to live in
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house
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a house
the house
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but some
says
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say
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an
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apply
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apartments are more
advantagous
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advantageous
. As I
belive
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believe
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it
is totally depend
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totally depends
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on
personal
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a personal
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choice to live in an apartment or a
house
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, Let discuss both
point
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points
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of view.
To begin
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with, the
people
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who prefer
houses
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and
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apply
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says
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say
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it is more
benificial
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beneficial
,
such
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as
houses
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has your own privacy in term of your building
is
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being
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seprate
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separate
separated
from other
houses
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so that there is not any close contact with
neigbour
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neighbour
.
Therfore
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Therefore
, if there is not any close contact so
people
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can enjoy loud music
amd
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and
enjoy their quality time with their loved ones, to
examlified
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exemplified
,
according to
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a surrvey
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surrvey
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survey
surveys
in
police
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the police
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department police got more calls
by
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from
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people
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from
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the apartment
an apartment
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apartment
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apartments
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for loud music or loud noise around them.
Moreover
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,
houses
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has
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have
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their own parking in front of the
house
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and
has
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have
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their own laundry build-in
house
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so that they
not
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do not
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have to move
alot
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a lot
to do laundry and to reach their
vechicles
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vehicles
.
On the other hand
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,
An
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apply
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apartments
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apartment
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has
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have
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their own
benifits
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benefits
to
live
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living
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in
such
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as
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people
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for people
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who like to live on heights
an
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and
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apertments
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apartments
apartment
are
best
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the best
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place for them
thry
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they
can enjoy the beautiful
scean
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scene
ocean
from
height
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a height
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and they can more
clear
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a clear
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view
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then
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than
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someone who lives in
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house
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the house
a house
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or ground level.
In
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addition
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,addition
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an
apratment
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apartment
are
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is
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more safer
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then
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than
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any
house
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on
road
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the road
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because there are checkpoints in apartments where any unknown
being
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is being
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checked for security reasons.
Whereas
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,
houses
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are individually dependent for their own security and handling purpose.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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