You work at home and you have a problem with a piece of equipment your purchased for your job. Write a letter to company which supplied the equipment.

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Dear Sir or Mam, I am writing

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letter to complain about a printer that I purchased from your company

last

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Monday which was June 1,2023. Well,

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device has a 2022 model with black-white and colourful printing options.

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, it can

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print 3D photocopies.It cost me $800 excluding taxes.I bought

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machine for my work purpose because I spend most of the time in my home office where I need a printer most of the time.Unfortunately, when I installed it and tried to use it

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it was not printing properly.I

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checked the ink cartridge but it was completely fine. Anyways, I would like to request an exchange for

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device as soon as possible or pay back my money.I hope you will solve

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issue

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week so that I can complete all of the assignments that are pending to complete

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broken machine.I will wait for your response. Thank you, Yours sincerely, Anmol Sharma

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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You work at home and you have a problem with a piece of equipment your purchased for your job. Write a letter to company which supplied the equipment.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In recent years, there has been a noticeable trend in Vietnam towards adopting Western architectural styles in residential housing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Schools should use films, computers and games instead of books. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What are some ways of reducing plastic for a greener environment? Support your position with reasons and examples taken from your reading, experience and observations.

Sone people think that newsapers are the best media to learn and get information from while others believe that the internet is a better source. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.