Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

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I agreed that a person’s choice of clothes could tell about their
character
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and culture because nobody chose their unfavorite
fashion
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style. To me, I couldn’t dress up in a more vintage dress and flower hairpins
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I would feel sick and unconfident. As my best friend always chooses an elegant
fashion
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style and she is easily identified among the crowd
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a party because of her nice gesture and beautiful voice.
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, you will hardly recognize her anger and
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apply
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feeling if she doesn’t tell you.
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, she was very angry with me when I didn’t inject Covid vaccine in the
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pandemic and she didn’t contact me during that time. One day she called and told me many things happened to her
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the covid sick how she got.
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, she told me she was very very angry with my choice and how she thought and was worried about me. Oppositely, I am different from her
character
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, I’m very simple and easily believe in people and their stories. So my
fashion
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style is simple and comfortable
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jeans and T-shirts showing my
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.
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as my brother easily makes me sad and angry but he calls me for my help or tells his stories. I forget all things that hurt me before and be ready to help or listen to him as possible. Some people say that
fashion
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can show a person’s culture and
character
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, I think it’s true
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me and my friends.
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, you guess and read someone’s
character
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if you really want through their clothes. It’s helpful in social communication.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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