Transporting large amount of food to richer nations from developing countries is having an impact on air pollution and climate change. Some people say such imports should therefore be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Importing huge amounts of
food
to developed
nations
from under-developed
countries
is having an impact on
air
pollution
and
climate
change
. A handful of individuals say that in
order
to reduce
air
pollution
and
climate
,
food
should not be imported. I totally disagree with the given notion. there are many reasons why
food
should be imported which will be elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs. A number of reasons why
food
ought to be transported to opulent
countries
from poorer
countries
. The predominant one is that everyone knows that
food
is an essential
to
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source in everyone's life as without
food
no one can survive in today's life. In developed
countries
, there may be fewer farms in
order
to produce
food
over there,
therefore
they purchased
food
from those
countries
where it is produced in
a huge amounts
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. If
food
less
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produced in wealthy
countries
, those people who live in richer
nations
would not be able to survive for a long time.
For instance
, in Canada, numerous people live a healthy life just because of India as India is produced cereals
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Canada which
is
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healthy to eat. developing
nations
also
earn a lot of money by importing different kinds of
food
from other
countries
.
This
would be helpful in
order
to make the economy better for their country.
Thus
,
food
importation should not be reduced as not only it is fruitful for developed
countries
but
also
for poorer
countries
.
Moreover
, only if
import
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food
from poorer
nations
to wealthy
countries
stop
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to produce
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,
climate
change
as well as
air
pollution
could not be reduced so the regime should emphasise
on
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other aspects of increasing
air
pollution
and
climate
change
. Other factors
such
as reducing the use of cars as it emits smoke
in
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the
air
which
are
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increasing
air
pollution
in the atmosphere and
industries
also
play a significant role in inclining
air
pollution
and
climate
change
in the environment so the government should reduce the use of
industries
or establish
industries
out of town in
order
to tackle with
this
hindrance. A survey conducted by the BBC (British Broadcast Corporation demonstrated that 78 per cent of
air
pollution
and
climate
change
were increased
due to
cars and factories. In conclusion,
although
a plethora of the masses
deems
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that reducing
air
pollution
and
climate
change
transportation of
food
to other
countries
ought to be reduced, I disagree with
this
notion as
food
transportation is not having much impact on
air
pollution
and
climate
change
, cars and
industries
play a significant role in
order
to do bad environment.
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