The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in

a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The line graph above illustrates the amount of fish and three other kinds of meat ,namely
lamb
, beef and chicken that people of
a European countries
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consumed during the period between 1979 and 2004.
Overall
, the consumption of fish showed a small degree of fluctuation; meanwhile, the figure for
Lamb
, Beef and Chicken changed dramatically from the year 1979 to 2004. Starting with more than 50
grams
for each individual per week in 1979, the amount of Fish slightly declined for the next five years until 1984, followed by fifteen years of stability. In 1999,
this
amount decreased a little and
then
nearly remained unchanged until 2004.
However
,
Lamb
and Beef consumption with very high starting points of 150
grams
and more than 200
grams
per person per week respectively experienced many years of up and down and had the main tendency to diminish up to the year
of
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2004. Unlike these two kinds of food, the consumption of Chicken with a rather lower start than
Lamb
tended to soar and reached its peak of more than 250
grams
for each person a week in 2003 and stopped in 2004 with a small decline.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words lamb, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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