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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

#future #nobody #wiil #newspapers #books
With the advancement of
technology
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 most of the work is done using screens. In the coming
days
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 even newspapers and books will be read online using internet facilities. As far as I am concerned, the statement and some I partially agree with and some main points will be addressed in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, it is a
well documented
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 fact that the
internet
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Internet
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 plays a major role in providing people with ample information, making work easier and
efficient
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more efficient
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.
For instance
,
people
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 who want to know the details of a particular topic,the internet will give them a bunch of websites and resources with immediate effect. Equally important, students could use their electronic devices and participate in
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classes without having to bring tons of books in the class.
For
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 students in Bhutan have five or more subjects in a day to learn and the fact that they have to carry extremely heavy backpacks to school.
This
 might even cause backaches and early symptoms leading to early ageing
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 health problems.
Furthermore
, it is easier for the readers to search the topic
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 a single click without having to flip hundreds of pages.
On the contrary
, even though
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adults are more attracted to e-books, these are not an effective way for
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older people and younger ones who are primitive are more likely to benefit from reading newspapers.
To conclude
, social networking is highly appreciated and mentioned by
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comers because of its convenience,
unlimited
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and unlimited
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 information.
However
 younger ones and
aged
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the aged
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 might find it complicated
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this
 method.
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