The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.
The pictures demonstrate how a bookstore has changed from 2000 to now.
Overall
, it is evident that
this
area underwent a number of significant alternations over the period. In 2000, there were many bookshelves with a variety of topics
such
as Art, Hobbies and Cookery
while
now, all of them are completely demolished to be converted into tables and chairs.
Whereas
there is a significant renovation in the longer fiction. It is separated into 4 parts and fiction is smaller than it was in the past when it was only 4 times smaller when compared to the one in 1990. There are three parts left that used to be in place of 3 bookshelves in the middle of the bookstore in 1990. One prominent from
this
map is that the non-fiction place in 1990 is now completely demolished to make way for the café shop.
Moreover
, the smaller fiction place in 1990 is now changed into non-fiction.
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