A museum near your house is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for voluntary/unpaid work in your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful Give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding the recent advertisement published in the Indian Express Newspaper on Thursday. I would like to apply for

this

voluntary Job in the Kapurthala district museum. Well, I am currently pursuing a study in Cultural and Ethical course at Macmaster University. If I would get a chance to work in

this

museum, It would be beneficial for me to enhance my knowledge in the current course.

Moreover

, I have a huge interest to learn and keep knowledge about our history, culture, and tradition. Actually, I have some basic skills, which would be great, and a win-win situation for both, the museum and

for

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me,

such

as a fast learner, a multi-tasking, and an energetic person. My current course will

also

be a plus point to develop my knowledge. I am available for work as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Regards Amandeep Kaur

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