Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.
Recently, in every part of the world , we have seen lots of
kids
who growing up with second mothers.Obviously,nows kids
growing and developing without parents
because parents
did not have any time
for looking after their kids
, they always work their jobs at all times.Yet , there is some disagreement as to whether this
growth without parents
causes future
problems or not While
there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary,I personally believe that this
issue causes a variety of problems in future
.The reasons to support my view are as follows.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that when kids
grow up lonely,they struggle in future
social areas to socialise or meet other people . The primary reason for this
problem , these kids
did not see anyone in regular day
life at home and Replace the word
daily
this
causes they
Correct pronoun usage
them
paid
attention to solo things Change the verb form
to pay
such
as video games , watching television and so on . That is
to say , if kids
grow like that , they will be shy to others who grow with their family members in future
.
Equally important,though, when parents
did not share any time
with their children , we can clearly see lonely parents
in future
because the kids
have never learned to share time
with family. For instance
, in the USA this
lonely parents
rate has been increasing because working people's rank was top of the world list . As a consequence
, parents
who did not separate time
for their kids
will live alone and it also
brings some mental health problems.
To sum up
, I once again restate my view that if parents
want to have some visitors or family time
with their children , they need to give some time
to their kids
' development .Submitted by steam_ahmet2004 on
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