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some people believe that criminal should be punished after commiting crime. However, criminals are commiting crime again after completing their punishment.  why this might be the case. what can be done to solve this problem.

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A few sections of people consider
that
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offenders
 ought to be punished who take part in antisocial activities,
whereas
criminals
 are participating in the offence again after their
punishment
. The fundamental reason is that
offenders
 have habitual of a felony, whilst the Supreme should apply a penalty for
criminals
. Foremost, the prominent cause behind why
criminals
 commit crimes again after their
punishment
 is that when
offenders
 are set free from prison, they would be addicted
of
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crime
 as it is a convenient way to fulfil their basic needs without any hard work, so they perform criminal activities continuously.
For instance
, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that in New York 35% of individuals commit crimes after completing their
punishment
 because earning money by doing work is difficult for them. Despite the above-mentioned reason, there is a solution is government need to create strict laws. If higher authorities make policies for those
criminals
 who commit
crime
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crimes
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agian
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again
 and again, they will have fear of
fine
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fines
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 and
punishment
 with the assistance of
this
 they do not do
crime
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the crime
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.
For example
, it is an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that the American government make
strict
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a strict
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 rule for
offenders
.
As a result
,
crime
rate
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rates
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 are decreasing regularly because they have afraid of
punishment
as well as
 fines.
To conclude
,
criminals
 do crimes as it is an effortless way of earning cash, but it puts an adverse impact on
nation's
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 development and it can be solved
one
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 law authorities implement strong rules.
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