The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of layovers between people who had their own house to stay and those who accommodated someone’s house to pay money in England and Wales for nearly a century from 1918 and 2011.
Overall
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, England and Wales citizens spend cash to have an apartment,
instead
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, they roomed and paid. The figure had upward and downward trends on both sides. In time, people changed their expenses behaviour about the flat. In the
beginning
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people hired a flat over 75%, and that percentage
also
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was peak to rented a home.
In other words
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, leased residences significantly dropped after 1918.
On the other hand
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, the two nations preferred to buy nearly a proportion of 20%. To buy an apartment reached a peak in 2001 was just under 70%. Until the end of the figure, house owners gradually increased
while
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leased residences significantly dropped. Two sides were at the same level in 1971, they were fifty-fifty.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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