Many people believe that social networking sites (such ad Facebook) have had a huge impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree ?

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The most controversial issue today relates how to impact the of social
media
such
as Facebook , Twitter, what’s Up and Snapchat on the generation. I strongly agree with
this
statement. In
this
essay , I am going to examine
this
question
then
I will give my own opinion On one hand, social
media
has developed in society makes opportunities for a lot of people to have a
job
.
Moreover
, you can look for a
job
when you sit at home.
For instance
, LinkedIn applications are for searching for a
job
and you applied your resume and makes other see it and choose you if you are matching the
job
.
Besides
that everything happens in the world now anyone knows about it on the same day one good illustration of
this
is the demonstration in Egypt that started on Facebook arrangement everything happened there .
On the other hand
,
firstly
the crime rate has increased dramatically.
In other words
, your personal information is available to everyone.
Secondly
, we must be able to limit ourselves in using the internet it is a bad habit, one example in the past I sat for studying at 5 hours
however
now I can not sit to read a book or study it is because of the impact of social
media
In conclusion, it seems to me that social
media
brought us more benefits like many opportunities to have a
job
and can make changes for the community.
Whereas
the crime rate has increased and the information about people available to everyone
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