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The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.
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These table and pie charts depict the police
budget
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 in Britain for two years. It is clear from the graph that the pie chart has the spending rate and the highest one was on
salaries
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.
According to
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 what is shown there was an increase in the total
budget
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 with about an extra 14
million
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 in 2018, but most of the income of the
budget
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 is from the local taxes with about 10
million
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. After that come from the national government with 2.3
million
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, but the lowest income was from other sources with around half a
million
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.
Moreover
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, all the
budget
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 has to spend, but most of the spending was on
salaries
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 with 69% in 2018 and
that is
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 6% less than
last
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 year.
Next,
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they put more money
on
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 technology with an extra 6%, but the buildings and transport system were equal in both years with 17 per cent.
To sum up
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, we could say that
this
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 technology part has increased by 6%, but the
salaries
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 have declined to be from 75% to 69% and
that is
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 mean
the
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6% of the
salaries
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 went to the technology part.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words budget, salaries, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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