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What can be done to solve the pollution caused by plastic bag?

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Recently , doing shopping has been
increasing
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 trendy and end of the shopping you have to put your things which were taken by you in a plastic bag . Obviously ,
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 causes lots of environmental pollution. Yet , there is some disagreement as to whether the plastic bag is necessary or not . In
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 essay , I purpose some solutions with examples and try to draw a conclusion . First of all , it is an undeniable fact that these things give huge damage to our environment and If we do not cut off the usage of packets,
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 cause to the end of the world.To solve
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 problem, the primary tackle should be changing plastic
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 to cartoon ones which are made by recycling and in the long term it causes to rise in the size and number of the forest because if we use cartoon
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 , companies do not need to cut some trees . Some brands start a campaign ,
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, if you buy a non-plastigplastig bag ,you can win some plus money for other shopping and
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 offer aims to rise usage of recycling
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 Another tackle is that organised recycling
machines
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 will be helpful
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 saving the world.
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 to say , when people put that non-healthy packet into
machines
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 , the
machines
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 give money for a percentage.
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, when the government put that
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 near shopping centres , people who turn back to other shopping put their
bags
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 into
machines
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 to take some money and if
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 idea clearly worked , recycling things worked very well .
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 , to tackle
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 issue we can use those two solutions to decrease the usage of non-healthy
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 . In my belief ,
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 proposition can make lots of changes for better living quality.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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