Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Many

people

use

their

car

to get to

work

(reach their workplace/ commute to

work

)

instead

of using public transport or walking and cycling.

This

can be good for their comfort, but at the same time it is detrimental to the

environment

and traffic can be really annoying and a

lot

of times there are no parking places. That's why I believe there are more disadvantages,

however

, there are

also

some advantages.

Firstly

, using a

car

is more convenient for a

lot

of

people

, which can be considered

as

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an advantage.

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if it is really bad weather

people

would like to go with a

car

because it is more comfortable for them. Public transport is often crowded with

people

so there are not always enough places for everyone. In comparison, in the

car

people

always have their own comfortable

seat

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,if a person lives outside the city or

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far away from school or

work

it is not possible for them to

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go

a bike or walk to the place so it is logical and much faster to

use

a

car

.

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However

, if

people

need to get somewhere on time a

car

is not always the best option. If a person has to go to school or

work

early there is probably going to be traffic so they have a chance of running late to the place they need to be at so it is clearly a disadvantage.

Moreover

, there is not always enough parking space for everyone and a

lot

of them are not free

as a result

people

need to look longer for parking space and have enough money to pay for it.

Furthermore

, using cars has a bad impact on the

environment

. Nowadays,

people

are talking a

lot

about how to take care of the

environment

and how to stop climate change. One of the most simple things that

people

can do is

use

their cars less because they pollute the air, which causes climate change and harmS

people

's health. In conclusion,apart from the advantages of

car

use

like comfort, I believe the disadvantages are more important because it harms the

environment

and

also

has a bad effect on

people

's health.

Also

, it is not so convenient as it might look like traffic and the expensive parking places are always a problem.