Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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use

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their

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to get to

work

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(reach their workplace/ commute to

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instead

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of using public transport or walking and cycling.

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can be good for their comfort, but at the same time it is detrimental to the

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and traffic can be really annoying and a

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of times there are no parking places. That's why I believe there are more disadvantages,

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, there are

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some advantages.

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, using a

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is more convenient for a

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of

people

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, which can be considered

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an advantage.

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if it is really bad weather

people

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would like to go with a

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because it is more comfortable for them. Public transport is often crowded with

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so there are not always enough places for everyone. In comparison, in the

car

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people

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always have their own comfortable

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.

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,if a person lives outside the city or

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far away from school or

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it is not possible for them to

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go

a bike or walk to the place so it is logical and much faster to

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a

car

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However

, if

people

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need to get somewhere on time a

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is not always the best option. If a person has to go to school or

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early there is probably going to be traffic so they have a chance of running late to the place they need to be at so it is clearly a disadvantage.

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, there is not always enough parking space for everyone and a

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of them are not free

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people

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need to look longer for parking space and have enough money to pay for it.

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, using cars has a bad impact on the

environment

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. Nowadays,

people

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are talking a

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about how to take care of the

environment

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and how to stop climate change. One of the most simple things that

people

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can do is

use

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their cars less because they pollute the air, which causes climate change and harmS

people

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's health. In conclusion,apart from the advantages of

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use

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like comfort, I believe the disadvantages are more important because it harms the

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and

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has a bad effect on

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's health.

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, it is not so convenient as it might look like traffic and the expensive parking places are always a problem.