Today many people do not know their neighbours. What are the reasons and solutions for this issues.

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Thurst of privacy has become everyone's top priority today. Folk not only in their locality but
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in their own family demands isolation. The trend has become quite common and everyone respects other individual's seclusion too but excess of everything is fallacious. Complete isolation is often mistaken as one's privacy and
people
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start cutting themselves off from the rest of the world.
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, they don't even know who their nearest
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are.
To begin
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with,
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in the first place don't like anyone's interference in their daily chores
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they start ignoring another individual on the face and name it as his or her seclusion.
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, the other person
also
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behaves in the same manner and ,
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this
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becomes a family's habit of not interfering with each other's matters.
This
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starts from a family to friends and relatives and so on. Slowly and gradually
this
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starts becoming a menace to the social life of the
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.
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, the
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nowadays is more literate and aware and being occupied by their work most of the
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people
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demand isolated
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.
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, when both husband and wife are working and got to meet each other only in the evening, it is obvious they demand seclusion from other family members of the family. The other family members sometimes become offended by
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act and start reacting in the same way. Unlike previous times, when the whole streets jointly celebrate festivals, it's restricted to only individual houses.
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, I would suggest dividing
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for every activity is very crucial. There's no doubt everyone should have their own private
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to spend but the
community
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should not bypass other social issues stemming from being isolated as a rise in crimes, robbery etc. I must say we should vent
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our thoughts more often with other
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and should use
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parks
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halls specially built by the government so we better know our society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • neighbourhood bonds
  • social media connectivity
  • urban lifestyle
  • online relationships
  • fast-paced society
  • privacy concerns
  • communal relations
  • individualism
  • transient societies
  • expatriates
  • cultural shift
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