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Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.

The whole world can be differentiated by its
culture
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,
language
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, geography and weather conditions. The films made in different parts of the world can teach us about that place a lot. I personally learned various things about a
country
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 from watching its
movies
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. I will explore my opinions in the following essay.
To begin
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 with, one can learn a lot about the
culture
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 of a
country
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 by watching their
movie
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. The different festivals and fairs shown in the
movie
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 give
people
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 an idea about the customs in that specific
country
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.
For example
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, one of my favourite
movies
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 was shot in Italy. They showed various museums, artwork, and exotics locations of that
country
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 within that
movie
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,
therefore
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, the highlight was the famous “La Tomatina” festival in Italy. I have never witnessed the festival in real life
whereas
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 watching that
movie
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 gave me real-life experience through the characters of that
movie
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. That's how
people
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 can learn about different cultures from the
movies
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 they watch.
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, almost every part of the world has its own
language
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, and
movies
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 provide us with a great opportunity to learn that
language
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. Learning a
language
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 from a
movie
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 can help an individual to understand local
people
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 and could be beneficial in tourism.
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, I have learned Japanese from their
movies
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, which helped me a lot during my solo trip to Japan,
last
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 year. I had no difficulty in finding pocket-friendly homestays
due to
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 my
language
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 proficiency. I was able to connect with local
people
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 and understood their
culture
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 better
due to
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 the absence of a
language
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 barrier. My trip experience was amazing
due to
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 the
language
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 I learned from the
movies
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. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
people
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 can learn about a
country
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 by watching its
movies
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. It can teach about the
culture
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 of that
country
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 and
also
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 helps to increase the understanding of different languages through
movies
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.

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