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Some believe telling the truth in the relationship is not worthy, on the other hand, some people support the idea of being truthful to maintain the relationships healthy. I will explore the importance of telling the truth in the following essay.

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Firstly
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, The
truth
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 creates
trust
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 in relationships.
For example
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, many companies show lies in their advertisements to increase their sales,
however
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, those lies can break the
trust
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 between customers and companies. Because customers would know the
truth
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 after buying or using their products.
This
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 example shows how lies could break
trust
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.
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, A lie could be more painful and heartbreaking after the revelation of the
truth
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.
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, if your friend is wearing a dress for a party and asks for your opinion. Expressing your opinion of disliking the dress could spoil her mood for a moment,
nevertheless
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, someone else's bad comments about her dress will make her feel worse. So telling the
truth
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 in the first place would be less hurtful.
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, there is always a risk factor of
truth
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 emerging sooner or later, which can affect the relationship in future. The story of "the boy who cried wolf" illustrates the consequences of telling a lie. No one will believe you are telling the
truth
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 in future. In conclusion, I strongly believe telling the
truth
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 can maintain
trust
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 in a relationship. The
truth
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 could be bitter but saves you and your loved ones from heartache. And a lie could affect the future of your relationship.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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