The diagram illustrates information about telephone signal in the UK for the years 1995-2002.

The diagram illustrates information about telephone

signal

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signals

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in the UK for the years 1995-2002.

Overall

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, the telephone calls are divided into three types and their

progresses

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are various.

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the highest index of minutes was in 1999 between local calling -- a majority

nine

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of nine

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in ten(90%). What is

about

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the lowest point?

This

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number is merely a tiny faction in

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1995 in the middle of mobile calls. Based on

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, it can see that

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minutes inside the country, the less from mobile

phone

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phones

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and

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rings from abroad or nationalities. For 1995-2002 years

the

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both types: mobile and international buzz

are

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increased from less

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ten per cent to more than two in five(40%) and second -- about one in three to in the region of sixty per cent. The third category between 1995-1999 years are grown from more than 70% to exactly a nine in ten,

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between 1999-2002 are fallen to starting position

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than eighty

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cent.